F108
Creativity in a Box: Jordan’s Alibi 1000 words.
Rules: Only
dialogue and no tags,
All objects’
names must start with same letter.
Show a
discovery that leads to a conflict between the two characters
1000 words
exactly. The rules must be posted above the story but are not counted in the
total word count.
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Concordia,
Kansas County Jail
November 17,
2025, 10:30 p.m.
“What have
you done, Jordan? The police called that you were in jail. I missed an entire afternoon of work because
of this, and I don’t even know what ‘this’ is! You’d better start talking son!”
Melissa eyed
the only chair with disgust, wiped the seat off with a gloved hand and sat,
glaring at her son. Her uniform scrubs
were a pristine white, and her brunette hair was in a bun.
Jordan
sighed and waved his hands. “Me and the gang were just hanging out, and it was
getting late, so I was driving them home, since I’m the only one with a running
car.” He was wearing faded blue jeans and a t shirt with MAGA emblazoned across
his chest. His brown hair was clean and disheveled.
“And?”
Melissa encouraged Jordan to go on.
“Well, suddenly,
this old man literally jumped out in front of my car! There was no way I could
miss him, Mom! I tried to swerve, but I
was too late. I heard a loud thump and
stopped . The fog was so thick, Mom! I
couldn’t see anything except churning white mist everywhere.”
“Who is this
guy you hit?”
“I have no
idea. I’ve never seen him before. I called 911 and they sent a patrolman.”
“What did
the police say?”
“They
said they were holding us until they
‘completed their investigation.’ How
long do you think it will be before I can go home?”
“I don’t
know son. You only have a learner’s permit to drive, so that’s another charge.
Had you been drinking or using any drugs?”
“No.”
“Well, I’m checking
with the detective and see what they say. In the meantime, you need to think
about everything that happened.”
Melissa
stood up and paced the small drab cell. Only
a few items were visible: The cot had a thin mattress and cover, the chair, and
a commode against the far wall, a
Styrofoam coffee cup with some stale cookie crumbs, and a clock high on the
wall. The floor was dirty concrete.
Melissa
shuddered. This is not what she had planned for her son. She saw her son
becoming a doctor or lawyer, or a business owner, not a criminal. Sighing, she glanced at her son, sitting on
the cot with his head in his hands, shaking his head in despair. She
reclaimed her seat on the dirty chair.
“Jordan? Is
there anything else I need to know before I leave to talk to the investigator? Any
other charges they will make?”
“Of course
not, Mom. Like I said, we were just driving home in the fog and the old guy
literally jumped out in front of the car. It was like he wanted to get hit. I
don’t know, maybe he was suicidal or something, you know?”
“Was he
killed on impact, or was he awake for a bit before he died?”
“I didn’t
hear him say anything or move. He just laid there.”
“OK. I’m
going to talk to the detectives now. I’ll be back later. Get some rest. OFFICER!”
An officer
came, opened the door and allowed her to leave.
11:45 p.m.
“Jordan? Are
you awake?”
“Yeah. I am
now,” Jordan sat up, wiping his eyes.
“what’s new?”
“Our lawyer
will be here in the morning to visit you. The investigators had some more
charges.”
“What? What
charges ?”
“Possession
of stolen property. There were stolen
laptops, tablets, chargers, cell phones, and other electronic devices in your
car trunk. What were you thinking,
Jordan?”
Melissa
paced the small cell, one hand on her brow, another planted firmly on her hip.
Her face was contorted with anxiety, concern, and anger.
Jordan
stared at her in confusion and shock.
“What? I
don’t know anything about any stolen property!
I didn’t steal anything, and I don’t believe my friends would---”
Jordan
stopped midsentence. Surely, they
wouldn’t have done this and not tell me! How did they get access to the trunk?
Why is this happening?
“What,
Jordan? What are you thinking?”
“Remember
yesterday, when I had to study for that big exam? Jimmy asked to borrow my car
for a few minutes, and I gave him my keys.
I didn’t think anything about it. They’d borrowed it before and nothing
came of it. But surely, they wouldn’t have---Oh God, surely, they didn’t rob a
store and leave their loot in my car!
Some friends!”
“Oh Jordan!
What a mess! I don’t know how we’re going to prove that you weren’t in on that
robbery, if that is what happened. Did anyone see you in the library while you
were studying? Do you have an alibi?”
“I’m not
sure---wait! The librarian talked to me briefly while I was there. We were
talking about a book that I needed for my term paper. Mom! Can you go talk to
her about me? Her name is Sally Goodman.
I was by her desk the entire time I was there.”
“I certainly
will, but you will be answering for the manslaughter charges anyway. And more
punishment at home, “if” you get out of
jail.”
“Yes, mom.”
One week
later, after bail was posted and Jordan was home under curfew, the lawyer
called and told the family that after investigation, Jordan’s alibi had checked
out, so he was cleared of the theft charges, his friends had been arrested for
the crime, and the family of the old man had reported he had been suicidal for
months and had tried this method several times. They were ruling his death as
suicide.
The only
charge that remained was driving without a full license. His permanent license
would not be issued until he was 20 years old as a result of this incident. His partying was over.
Jordan was
doing chores and odd jobs in the community to atone for his “crime” and he was
attending church every Sunday with his Mom.